Make a song in 30 minutes

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guys make some more songs this started out really well, i want to listen to your stuff!

i'm not very good at guitar or singing :/ i mostly do piano kek
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this sucks i hate you

i tried my best :/

cant sustain a creative "general" with just 4 lads im afraid

Sounds like alot of sc/bc indie I've heard, the slow strumming a major 7th only to strum the same melody on a single chord change in a 2 chord loop. I'd be harsh on it in other circumstances. But I like the sound, the drone throughout it, and the guitar sliding between chords. 6/10
Pretty underwhelming drum track at the start. The hi hats are super sterile as they usually are with 808s but it can be done well. But then the strings and the chime comes in and they kinda cover the inadequacy of the beat with a nice chill vibe and little melody. The synth also complements it well but doesn't sound very good atfirst when it's on its own. Then that dx7 sounding high string comes in sounding really bad with a meh melody as the lead. There's something in here but it's held back. 5/10
You gotta raise your vocal volume, I can only half make it out. But I like the attitude of the rap and the groove, could make a sick intro to a chorus or something. 6/10
What is that metallic overtoney plop sound there? It sounds good. I always like the lofi drums too. The synth melody is lame though, not only does it not stand on its own as a melody, it doesn't compliment the lead. 6/10
Hard to complain here. It's very low-key, it's mixed great, the strings complement the beat. It sounds like alot of synthwave sounds atfirst, but the drum beat that comes in later was a spin that sounded really good, same with that soft synth fading in and out. 7/10

I'll make something horrid later. Love these threads.
I reviewed them all but pic related pissed me off.

I would take five seconds off of the intro but it's good build up
I like this
what level? I imagine a city landscape or something with vehicles.
It's fine but something about the 808 could be different but I am nitpicking. I think I just pref something lower with out such I'll deem it""""808 vibrato"""" shake
Project. Sing louder. It's fine.

project. sing louder. it's fine

but sirrr i'm eliott smith sir

Starting mine now. I'll be trying to do a electropunk kind of thing.